Thursday, September 6, 2012

Fall DWA


The cold chills of a fall breeze tingling down my spine and the strong sent of fear coming off of my partner. The stench intensified as we got closer to the power source. Me and Lucas, my partner who is currently drenched in fear, having been preparing for this moment in spy training our whole lives. We have yet to discover what this powerful source is capable of doing.

Lucas and I decided to search for clues. When we were walking we stumbled upon some ripped wires and some sparks. We had thought in our heads that those were left over from the power source. Instead, It turns out that those broken wires and sparks were just from a normal citizens light post.

              The next search was a complete success. We found one clue after another. They each had something in common. They all involved something with pets. From one saying “The greatest pet is the on that you pick out together with your family” to the last clue saying “All animals meet on one street, greens street.”

            Nights after nights trying to put all clues together so they would make sense just got exhausting. Lucas and I decided to bring in help. The next day we called up our friends who is also a spy like us to crack these clues. In an hour we heard the door bell ring. We were greeted by a polite hello by Sam. After greeting one another we got right down to business. Minutes by minutes kept passing by but we had no luck. Approximately five hours after we started, a brilliant idea popped into Lucas head. The last clue had said “All animals meet on one street, green street.”  Lucas knew that in Boston Massachusetts they had a pet shop on Green St. We decided to take this chance and go find this power source.

            It had only took us five minutes for us to find gremlin’s pet shop. Our detector was going off crazy but there was no sight of the power source. We decided to go inside to take a better look at things. Lucas kept on sneezing while we were by the cats and distracted him from his work. Finally he snapped out of it. I went over by the dogs to see if the detector went off over there. It did but we don’t know where it is. The strongest is down under me. How is that possible? There must  be some way to get down there. Lucas and I searched for a secret door way, I had no luck finding one. five minutes Lucas stumbled upon dog food and picked it up. When he had picked it up it opened a secret door. We went in about a mile and started hearing a beeping noise followed by sirens. Lucas gave me  this nervous look when he heard the noises. I told him to keep walking with his eyes peeled for anything. We heard a noise again but this was no siren or beeping it sounded like big booms. We dashed out as quick as we could but we didn’t make it back. Rocks after rocks were pilled upon us, struggling to get out. Lucas got out first and helped me up. We were both severely injured by the heavy rocks. Me and Lucas had just realized that the power source had turned on an alarm and hit a self destruct button to cause all of the rocks in the cave to fall. Then and there we realized that this was truly mission impossible and we had failed.  

3 comments:

  1. I love how there are clues and puzzles like a real mystery. Your descriptive language is incredible! Next time, you should proof read you story, because I saw some spelling errors in the beginning. Other than that, keep up the great work!

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  2. I liked your conclusion and basically how your piece came together. Like Tien said there were a few spelling errors and parts where you were speaking in a different tense, but other than that great job!

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  3. Thanks, ya i just realized that! lol but thanks for the great advice though. :)

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